I especially liked it toward the end where the guy, frustrated, throws a chunk of coral at the sea gulls. And then the woman crosses her arms. Outstanding body language. A picture is worth a thousand word, to coin a phrase.
Sorry about the rejection from First Line. If you ask me, it was the implied sex scene that did it for them. Sex between Kris Kringle and his wife? Might as well imagine sex between ones own parents... No, on second thought, not a good idea. You mentioned that First line received a lot of entries for this upcoming issue, but did they take the time to give you any encouragement in their reply?
Bob
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