Nice atmosphere, Barbara. Really nice. I like the way you work through all those images (almost like snapshots) and land on the woman with the glass in her hand. Sharon, I'm guessing. Then you gradually reveal more and more detail, while still only alluding to her identity. And the way you have her going from room to room, turning on the lights, slightly unsteady on her feet. (That last detail was entirely me, of course. But it was right there between the lines) Terrific stuff, Barbara.
Bob
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