Surprise! We have sun, humidity, a balmy breeze. Reminds me of England in September. Crazy weather. Anyway, Barbara, while waking up, I remembered that I submit tonight. Well, that's not going to happen. Sorry. The schedule has been so turned around, that my submission date slipped this sieve of a mind that I currently have. I will have your critique of your story, though. I liked it a lot. The ending, though, seemed like it was something that you wanted to happen, rather than what the story wanted. But that's just me. I also like your post from this morning. "He shuffled into the narrow sliver of shade on the back side of the lighthouse and immediately felt better." Nice. See you later.
Bob
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