Thanks for Love Work, Barbara. The line Love, real love, sets in/ soon enough has the weight and rhythm of real poetry. I didn't want to comment on the rest of it too soon, because I wasn't at all sure what I wanted to say. It had to do with advice part. I may be way off, and feel free to ignore this, but it seems too abstract. The words you need need to hold closer to real situation and experience. Think of it as talking to the person you were thirty five, forty years ago. Thanks.
Bob ;-)
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