Barbara, I liked your jealousy sketch, but it was the "can I see you in the kitchen" story that hooked me. There's so much going on in it, and so much implied about the characters. Reminds me a little of a story by Grace Paley. Would you try writing an opening for it. A little something to set up what happens. Jennifer, your entry about coming from behind is dazzling. The combination of menace and the sensual really got me. Still working on Jenny's critique. See you later.
Bob
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