"Sails" has some excellent possibilities, and not just because Max caresses the old boat as if it were his beloved's breasts - though that particular phrase certainly doesn't hurt. I like your choice of Jamie as the child's name. The thing that got in your way, as I see it, was your choice of telling it in first person. Stay in the third, Barbara. It has served you marvelously well thus far. Oh, and I'll always respect you.
Bob;-)
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