Ah, Mona is a good name. Also good is making chicken soup. Hot, savory soup with a thick slice of bread on the side. If you ask me, cooking has a wonderfully fertile effect on your writing. I like that you've made Clarinda so curious about her world and the people in it. It is a fine detail that Bunny pulls out a fatty, and then sings Bob Marley songs to keep up his nerve. I like that Edward makes slightly disparaging remarks about the name of a bar, and that Louise tells him not to be superior. Especially, Barbara, I love that you've named the mystery lady Mona.
See you tonight. Save me some cake.
Bob
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