I like the beach scene. It's about time you wrote it. Unless my memory has gone bad there really hasn't been a comfortable, relaxed beach scene yet, and this one is a beautiful start. The problems you bring into it, the social misgivings you have running through Sharon's head, give it real weight. My question is this: why is she so aware of the mercenary implications of their skin colors? Also, is the color question that pronounced yet? Inquiring minds want to know.
Bob;-)
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