Wow

You're not a pest, Bob, but you are leader on Thursday, so you'll be the one keeping the rest of us rowdies in line.

That's some poem, very vivid. I can see the sky gobbling clouds--what a terrific image. I wish I'd thought of it. Hey, maybe those ideas that are pestering you but not making stories want to be poems. It's worth a shot. See you Thursday, critique in hand.

--Barbara