So far so good with the romance, Barbara. Who is Lucia? We know she is Anneka's niece, but whose daughter is she? (I'm guessing that Susanna is the servant.) At first I saw her with dark hair, but since it's a Dutch colony, her hair would be blond. Right? Or strawberry blond, perhaps. She has clear blue eyes and a wide mouth. She was teased (perhaps) as a child because it was too wide for her face. She has since grown into it. Her smile defines her. It is a beautiful smile.
I've read your poems through a couple times, though I haven't been able to form any clear impressions of them. Maybe the next time through.
Bob ;-)
ps: yesterday was Maxine Kumin's birthday.
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